Thursday, 14 April 2016


She smells like all different flowers together in a bunch.
Her caring voice makes petals float  on my heart    

Her kind and friendly smile
brings tears to my eyes.

She acts as if she was a mum for everyone,
When someone is hurt she helps them

Her shiny black curls
dance on her shoulders as she walks         

She is so calm about everything,
she never rushes.

She is always so passionate about
everything she does.   

Her ginormous smile gives me a wonderful feeling
that fills my very being.


  1. I love all of the strong words in the writing and how she is a mum to every one. I was a very good peac if writing.

  2. Your mum sounds like the best Mum in the world. Well done Sophia, because it was your words and the way you wrote them that made me feel this way. Your mum is very lucky to have a daughter like you, who appreciates her. x Mrs P

  3. I love your writing it's so good I love it.
    It sounds like your mum is the best mum in the world. You use so mean great words for your mum it's great.
    My favourite sentence is where you say her kind and friendly smile brings me tears in my eyes.πŸ‰πŸ‰πŸ‰πŸ‰πŸ‰πŸπŸπŸπŸπŸπŸ‡πŸ‡πŸ‡πŸ‡πŸ‡πŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ“πŸ“