Where does my heart lie?
Where the grass spreads
around me sawing in the wind
and makes me itchy.
Where the harakeke
waves to me in the wind
as I walk down the gravel path.
Where the bees swim around in the air
buzzing, talking to me
and the bell birds tweet, singing a song.
Where waves in the river
crash against each other,
having a fight.
Where the flowers
lay around me making me sneeze.
I am learning to to use more personification in my poem.
I think I am going well because I have got lots of ideas. I think my poem is multistructural because I can't connect my ideas yet, but I have got a few.
For example “the harakeke waves to me as I pass.”
My next step is to connect my ideas.